Saturday, July 31, 2010

Chapter 1: The Mystery Woman

Eddie Carbine and his friends Michelle Faye and her boyfriend Phillip Fate were shopping at Madison’s Department Store. Eddie, Michelle & Phil’s hands were full from carrying shopping bags. All Sudden Eddie heard 15 year old girl’s voice. “Help Me, I having a seizure”, 15 year old girl cried. Eddie put down his shopping bag on the floor when he heard the girl’s cries for help. Eddie looked at his friends Michelle and Phil and said “Michelle & Phil need you to guard my shopping bags because I wanna help this 15 year old girl because she’s having a seizure.”, replied Eddie. Michelle looked at Eddie.”OK. I and Phil will wait for you. “,said Michelle. Eddie run to help the 15 year old girl. The girl’s body stopped shaking because her seizure was over. Eddie took the girl’s hand to help her to get up. The girl looked at Eddie and smiled.”Thanks for helping me Sir. By the way what’s your’s name?”, asked the girl. Eddie smiled at the girl. “I’m Eddie Carbine”. “Nice to meet you Eddie. I’m Sally Miller.”,the girl replied. Sally felt Eddie’s shoulder length bleached blonde hair. “You have nice hair and nice dark eyes”, said Sally. Eddie started to giggle because Sally was firting about his shoulder lenght bleach blonde hair and his dark blue eyes. “Thanks.I have to go now because my friends are waiting for me.”,replied Eddie.Sally look at Eddie. “OK. Take Care. Bye For Now.”, replied Sally. Eddie went back to meeting with Michelle and Phil . Eddie, Michelle, and Phil headed to Madison’s Department Store’s Parking Lot to go in Phil’s car to go home for dinner, After Eddie, Michelle, and Phil left. Sally Miller was in Madison’s Parking Lot to find her Mom’s Car to meet her Mom. While Sally was walking to find her mother’s car Sally notice strange woman was coming after her. When the Strange woman got went near Sally. Sally started scream at the strange woman because Sally thought Woman remind her of a mannequin from a department store. Sally started run away from this strange woman but the strange woman was too fast for her. Sally stopped for a minute to catch her breath when the strange woman attack Sally and Sally fell down to the ground and the strange woman’s eyes had a bright green grow made Sally turn into a mannequin. The Strange woman dragged Sally’s mannequin body to Madison’s Department store.

After Eddie came back home from shopping with his friends Michelle and Phil at Madison’s Department Store. When Eddie enters at his house and he takes off his shoes and his coat. He heads to the kitchen to see his mom. He saw his mom making dinner. Mrs. Carbine closed the fridge door and walks near Eddie and smiled. “Hello, Eddie Sweet Heart. How was your day shopping with Michelle and Phil?” asked Mrs. Carbine. Eddie smiled back to his mom. “Fine, Mama.” replied Eddie. Mrs. Carbine gave a sad look to Eddie. “I heard in the TV news that some Security Guard find out that a 15 year old girl got murdered at Madsion’s Department Store parking lot. How the Security Guard find out was from a Security video. The F.B.I. and the police don’t know who murdered her” replied Mrs. Carbine. After Eddie saw his mother and also talking to her, Eddie headed to his bedroom. When he got his bedroom, he noticed his bedroom door was closed. Eddie knocked on the door. Eddie heard a voice that sound like a young 21 year old man was in his room. Eddie’s door opened. Eddie noticed the strange man was only wearing his dark blue jeans. Eddie started to gasp. “Sorry sir. Do you want me to leave?” asked Eddie. The strange man turned to face Eddie. “no. You don’t have leave because it’s only me your cousin Aaron Tyson” replied Aaron. Aaron was a tall young man. Aaron’s had body built like a hockey player. Aaron had chocolate brown eyes. Aaron loved going to the gym to stay in shape. He always likes to visit his Aunt Marie Louise Carbine’s family to spend time with his 20 year old cousin Eddie. Aaron never got along with Eddie’s twin brother Nick. Aaron puts on his favourite dark black muscle shirt. Aaron got his bed cot and started stand beside his cousin Eddie. Eddie felt surprised that his cousin Aaron was here. Aaron started giggle and smiled at Eddie. “The reason I’m here is that my parents are gone to Florida for four months and I decided to come to Friendship Valley to visit and stay four months with you and your family. Eddie, you are my favorite cousin. You now will have me as your roommate for four months. I was wondering if you can help me find a paid for four months?” asked Aaron. Eddie started to giggle with excitement. “Sure. Do you wanna work with me, Kathleen, Taylor and Katherine of The Friendship Cadets? My boss Mrs. Darcy won’t mind you working with us for 4 months. She’ll pay you five bucks a hour” replied Eddie. Aaron smiled at Eddie. “Sure. I’ll be happy to work with you and The Friendship Cadets” replied Aaron. When Aaron always visits Eddie, he always spends a lot time with Eddie by taking him to the movies, a hockey game and a baseball game. Aaron always watches Eddie play football for Eddie’s school football team. When Eddie left for dinner, Aaron gave Eddie a hand shake and a big bear bug.

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